Editorial Feedback

  Throughout the pass week in class we have been reviewing fellow students' draft videos that they are working on before we finish off the semester. I have noticed a lot of growth in us as a class and individually by analyzing all of the videos. There were some great creative ideas that many of my peers had that really was impressive. In  the beginning of the year, I wouldn't have imagined learning and taking on the bulk of challenging work we did during the past couple of weeks and with the way our drafts are looking make it seem like the grittiness has began to pay off.

 One thing in particular from watching the drafts of the videos in class is that as long as we put forth good effort and use our creative thinking in our video, the rest will take care of itself. There is a process that takes place in all aspects of life in order to reach a high amount of success. It is about how you prepare and execute your plans that you have in order to follow things out and be happy with yourself in the end. I feel like it was good to start my draft during the break and put a video together which got some good critiquing which I can build on from there. Not only was it convenient to get all of the class' help by peer editing but even just by comparing and contrasting the different ideas that we came up with for our videos could also be beneficial as we finish up our videos.

By having the opportunity to watch all of the drafts of the videos was a chance to make sure we all get good grades on the final video. Now since I know what my video needs work, it is just a mater of putting in the work. I need to leave enough time over the next day or two to finalize this video and finish up the editing. I know that I need more college thinking and informative data that support my argument about  the importance of time management. With a lot riding on my video grade I will be making sure my thinking is out of box and  the depth of data in my video is enough to show the audience that it is critical to manage one's time effectively. Now that I have seen what is expected and could be acceptable for a final video, it is up to me to apply myself and dedicate my time in order to making sure I produce a solid remainder of my video.

As you can see, there has been a lot of development over the past couple of months. Time is only going so slow, and the world waits for nobody at all. It is all about the motivation you have and how you want to be looked at when it is all over. People who  take pride in what they do always stand up to the plate and produce their best work when it matters the most.